Here are a dozen GREAT stories
written by the students in Mrs. Carter's Pandas class

at Camelsdale School in England

John and Seb went in a house. A tiger came. The tiger nearly bit Seb and John. The tiger nearly pushed them out of the window. John and Seb frightened the tiger away. John and Seb shouted "Hooray!".

By Sebastian (aged 5)

Once upon a time there were 2 people called John and El. They went into the woods one day and climbed over a big log. When they got to the river they climbed over some rocks.
John fell into the water. El jumped in to save John. El pulled John out onto the rocks. They ran home safely.

By Steven (aged 5)

The 2 bears went for a walk along the path. The sun shone. They decided to have a picnic. They went back home to get it ready. They packed some food and sandwiches. They packed a blanket to sit on. They ate.
The end.

By Scarlett (aged 4)

Once upon a time there were 2 bears and they were called John and El. They were playing football. John gave up. He wanted to go in the wood.
El said, "No".

By Harry (aged 5)

John and El went to some woods and found a waterfall and they jumped up and down. The bears went through the waterfall. El nearly fell. John fell and El jumped in. El swam. El got John. "Thanks" said John.

By Andrew (aged 5)

The bears wanted to go up a mountain. El saw one. "Let’s climb that one" she said. So they climbed it. They got to the top of the mountain. They slid down the mountain. Then they climbed a tree. The end.

By Laura (aged 4)

John and El went to the woods and played in the woods. El got lost in the woods and
John found El.

By Jonathon (aged 5)

Once it was El’s birthday.
El had lots of presents.
The end.

By Lucy (aged 5)

Once upon a time there were 2 bears called John and El. They went to the woods and nearly got lost. The end.

By James (aged 4)

John and El went to a waterfall. El fell in. A shark came. John jumped in. He hit the shark then rescued El.

By Joshua (aged 5)

Once there were 3 bears. They were called John and El. El heard a noise. El was frightened. El was so frightened El ran away. John found him and they went home.

By Caragh (aged 4)

One day, 3 bears called Melissa, Sam and Cameron came to a little house. A robber came in. They pushed him out. The end.

By Sam (aged 4)

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